Identify any issue with the following opening paragraph for…

Identify any issue with the following opening paragraph for this cover letter: “My name is Christopher Brown, and after 4 years of service and learning at the University of Florida I will be graduating with a Bachelor of Science in Athletic Training.  I have been researching the University of Florida’s Doctor of Athletic Training program for several years as an option for my next professional step. I think a Graduate Assistant position within the program would be an excellent fit for my professional development. I also believe my education and clinical experience qualify me for this position.”