Scenario: Curly has been tasked with writing the cover lette…

Scenario: Curly has been tasked with writing the cover letter for a proposal his boss has been working on for weeks.  After he submitted his letter to his boss for review, he gets it back with the following lines crossed out and the words “REWRITE” written in red.  “We look forward to the opportunity to submit our full proposal.  Your firm is known for its commitment to excellence and value, which we are confident we offer.  It would indeed be a profound privilege for us to work with you on this project.” Looking over the sentences, Curly decides that his boss wants him to revise them because they