For the three sentences and questions below, please answer both i. and ii. prompts. For each sentence you will (i) identify the errors, and (ii) provide a rewrite. Please include both parts in your answer for each example and appropriately label each part either i. or ii.

This question is another two-part question. (i) State what is wrong with the following sentence’s structure, and (ii) rewrite it more effectively. Sentence: Movements resulting from termination, layoffs, and leaves, recalls and reinstates, transfers in, transfers out, promotions in, promotions out, and promotions within are presently documented through the Payroll Authorization Form.

Rewrite the following sentence for concision and clarity. Sentence: A reduction in job-related accidents was achieved by an incentive program.

i. – Name the stylistic error made in the following wordy closing to a message. ii. – Rewrite the sentence with clear and concise phrasing.   Sentence: Please do not hesitate to call with any questions.

A petty cash fund requires less accuracy than a checking account.

Many pathogens use the same portal for entry and exit from the body.

Milrinone will NOT do what?

Which of the following is/are true of DNA replication?

The data that are magnetically encoded on the bottom of a check includes the bank identification number.

i. – Name the stylistic error made in the following wordy closing to a message. ii. – Rewrite the sentence with clear and concise phrasing.   Sentence: Please do not hesitate to call with any questions.