Question 7: Full Narrative EvaluationExcerpt:It was the wors…
Question 7: Full Narrative EvaluationExcerpt:It was the worst day ever, and from the moment I woke up, everything seemed to go wrong. I missed my alarm, which made me late for school, and when I got there, I realized I had forgotten my homework. Throughout the day, things didn’t get better. My friend barely talked to me, and I wasn’t sure why, which made everything feel even more frustrating. In one of my classes, I got a test back that I thought I did well on, but I ended up failing it. By the time the day was over, I felt completely drained. When I got home, I didn’t want to talk to anyone, so I just went to my room and went to sleep, hoping the next day would be better.Questions:What is the biggest issue in this narrative? (Choose ONE: detail, organization, dialogue, conflict, or description)What should the writer fix first, and why?Does the narrative feel engaging? Explain.Rewrite ONE part of the paragraph to:improve detailstrengthen the narrative