The paragraph contains several errors in pronoun-antecedent…
The paragraph contains several errors in pronoun-antecedent agreement, pronoun reference, and pronoun case. Decide if the underlined selection needs to be revised or if it is correct as is. Two actors who have made a tremendous commitment to fighting the injustices of the world are Brad Pitt and Angelina Jolie. There recent efforts include bringing aid to Pakistan after the devastating earthquake of 2005, providing aid and assistance to the poor and sick of Africa, working with his and her friend George Clooney on global awareness of the crisis in Darfur, and moving to New Orleans to support home building in the stricken Ninth Ward. Him and her travel the world in support of victims of various crises. Pitt’s special project has been to contribute his or her own funds to build 150 new homes in the Ninth Ward. Jolie has focused his or her energies on refugees. She has worked with the United Nations, touring border camps in Africa, Asia, and Latin America. She also lobbies on Capitol Hill. At any one time, Pitt or Jolie serve as goodwill ambassadors worldwide in her efforts to aid victims and end injustice. In addition, he and she have six children, including three adopted children: one from Cambodia, one from Ethiopia, and one from Vietnam.Which option below would be an acceptable revision of the underlined selection?